Practice: Paraphrasing

 

"A major source of misunderstandings in human relationships is that two individuals do not perceive similar causes for a specific behaviour. Collectivists tend to attribute events to situations and causes external to the individual more frequently than do individualists; individualists attribute events to internal individual causes more frequently than do collectivists.” (Triandis & Bhawuk, 1997, p.??). (BLUE TEXT)

 

Compare the quotation above with the two examples of paraphrasing below. Select the example which displays appropriate paraphrasing.

 

A major source of misunderstandings in human relationships is that people do not perceive similar causes for behaviour. Individualists tend to attribute events to internal individual causes more frequently than do collectivists whereas collectivists attribute events to situations and causes external to the individual more frequently than do individualists (Triandis & Bhawuk, 1997, p.??).

 

 

Differences in perceived causes of behaviour are a major source of misunderstanding in relationships. Such differences have been found between individualists and collectivists. Specifically, individualists are more likely than collectivists to attribute events to internal individual causes whereas collectivists are more likely than individualists to attribute events to factors external to the individual (Triandis & Bhawuk, 1997, p.??).

 

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